Lady Sydney

I agree with Lauren Malfoy, and I also noticed that you had two typos in your first stanza. The parts that I fixed are bolded: To every heart I have ...

I just saw I Am Legend over my holiday break, but it was a let down to both me and my mom. The previews made it look SO much better. ...

No doubt. I would be a dolphin! ^_^

Giraffe George Is Remembered As Farah's Former Egghead How about... Animosity?

I... don't get it. :? I read it three times, and still didn't get your point. Perhaps work on making it clearer with some imagery and cut out the repetition ...

10/10 I love Chowder ! XD

I'm hopelss, helpless, whatever you want to call it. ^_^ I practically run on nothing BUT food, water, and romance. That's what pretty much all of my stories/poems revolve around. ...

Thank you for your comments. =) ~Syd

Thanks again! :D

Thanks for your input, Cade! :D I've reduced it down to one "my" now. ^_^

Welcome to YWS, Jess! :D It's great to have you here with us. ^_^ I skimmed your profile just now and noticed that you've already made five or six posts ...

Via: Braylynn is so adorable! Such the sweetheart. ^_^ Doctor Kitty: Lol! Nice poses. :wink: Matt: You're so beautiful! No lie. And I love your [s]orange[/s] red YWS shirt! XD ...

Thank you for your comments, bubble and Audy! :D They were very helpful in letting me know how I should write the rest of my poems from here on out. ...

Why did you comment your own poem? :?

I'm not sure where this goes! Please move it if it's in the wrong place. Enjoy! My. How big you’ve grown. Like a full blossomed daisy in Spring. Your stem ...